Article review?

Circles and props—making unknown technology

Pros:
*Many useful points
*Pictures giving us visuals
*New things we learn

Cons:
*Too long
*Unnecessary pages
*Some Uninteresting paragraphs


Annotated Portfolios

Cons:
*Too Long
*Too much advanced terms
*Too boring

What to improve on this:
*Show statistics of research e.g. bar chart, line chart etc
*keep it short and sweet e.g. bullet points
*paragraphs should be separated into each topic

Taking Our Sweet Time to Search

Pros:
*Nice and easy paragraphs
*Separated under sub-headings

Cons:
*Too much technical terms


New Media, New Craft ?

Pros:
*Split into paragraphs

Cons:
*Too long